so the crit happened. my god, some people really brought their a game to this project. what a shame we had to do it in two groups, it would have been great see everyone's...

last couple of pages of the dummy book an WOW, did this thing devolve into half ass-ery (bg courtesy of google images, i'm looking at you). ah well, we've got until may to get these books ready for submission so going to try and get the penciled finals for these pages done and stick them in the dummy instead. also, FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING, PLEASE do something about that horrific font. i know you would throw yourself under a train for futura, but this is neither the time or place.

GOOD MORNING!




pages 5-8 from the macmillan book. man, it's not even funny how much shit you work out at this stage. we only had to get four final pages done in time for the crit but man, i cannot wait to get back on this and work out the rest of the tweaks.

o1





dummy book! this is basically a super rough version of the book to give folk an idea as to what the final thing will look like. huh. normally when it comes to roughs, they're just stick figures pulling goofy faces. this is a wee bit of a step up from that.